Comments on: Baby Shower Invitations Wording Ideas http://www.babyfirstyear.org/2009/04/baby-shower-invitations-wording-ideas.html Baby First Year blog give new parent All Information about your newborn baby. How to care your first year baby in the First curious and important Year. This is 100% Free Parenting tip for all Parent. Fri, 20 Nov 2009 22:09:05 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: CL Hendricks http://www.babyfirstyear.org/2009/04/baby-shower-invitations-wording-ideas.html/comment-page-1#comment-756 CL Hendricks Mon, 11 May 2009 17:52:40 +0000 http://www.babyfirstyear.org/?p=1315#comment-756 I don't mean to be critical, but you might want to ask someone to proof your text before going live. Perhaps English is not your first language, but "if you’re looking for and what I mean donations from the same problem should report to the invitations" makes absolutely no sense. Neither does: "If the mother to wait for the moment, select the items you wish to receive this award, which will certainly be taken note of the invitation." I actually refreshed the screen thinking the page was screwed up and there was a mixture of two posts. After re-reading (or trying to) your post I realize that most of it makes no sense. I doubt if this will get approved, but that's okay, if you become aware of problems you might be having. I don’t mean to be critical, but you might want to ask someone to proof your text before going live. Perhaps English is not your first language, but “if you’re looking for and what I mean donations from the same problem should report to the invitations” makes absolutely no sense. Neither does: “If the mother to wait for the moment, select the items you wish to receive this award, which will certainly be taken note of the invitation.”

I actually refreshed the screen thinking the page was screwed up and there was a mixture of two posts. After re-reading (or trying to) your post I realize that most of it makes no sense.

I doubt if this will get approved, but that’s okay, if you become aware of problems you might be having.

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